Monday, November 29, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph

Students should not be allowed to play sports if they have bad grades. There are other students that would like to have an oppurtunity to play any sport they want. But they can't because the roster is full and the team has about two or three students that have horrible grades. It doesn't matter how talented they are, if they have bad grades then they need to pass it up. Students need to be successful so situations like that wouldn't happen. The grade requirements should be at a 2.0 and if they can't even meet those requirements its unexceptable. Students just have to take responsiblity into there work and they will be fine.

2 comments:

  1. You have a good point. You made one mistake though on your spelling. You spelled unacceptable wrong. You spelled it, unexceptable, which is wrong. Other than that, good job.

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