Showing posts with label Persuasive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Persuasive. Show all posts

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Persuasive Essay: Opinion Statement Brainstorm

NFL athletes should not make so much money.
Student employees at SPA should be paid more money.
Drugs shouldn't be illegal if people still use.
December of 2012 people are going to be worried.
Students at SPA should not have check in times.
Which of these opinion statements should I select for my essay? Why?

Monday, December 6, 2010

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Persuasive Project Topic Request

After reviewing the Voxopop discussion, I would like to persuade people to Exercise, join a sports team, or do everything it takes to go to college. You may listen to my class’s discussion here

Talkgroup » SPA Class of 2014

Monday, November 29, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph

Students should not be allowed to play sports if they have bad grades. There are other students that would like to have an oppurtunity to play any sport they want. But they can't because the roster is full and the team has about two or three students that have horrible grades. It doesn't matter how talented they are, if they have bad grades then they need to pass it up. Students need to be successful so situations like that wouldn't happen. The grade requirements should be at a 2.0 and if they can't even meet those requirements its unexceptable. Students just have to take responsiblity into there work and they will be fine.

Monday, November 15, 2010

Homeroom Reform Essay

Final Draft Essay




Learning is every ones necessity, text books now don’t share as much information. There can always be a new way to learn with new text books and improved online text books. Students now don’t spend as much time using them to help there resources. Most of the students and adults use the Internet to help them in many ways including school work. But now since we have textbook students wont be on the Internet as much.

The online version has specific details that will help you on a certain chapter that your working on. All you have to do is put in your period that you have that class in, also your password and it will take you strait to the online version of the textbook. Quiz's an test will be in the back of the books for the teachers to give you and also test yourself on what you and other students achieved and learned . We need funding for multiple reasons like a lot of the students abuse the textbooks and they don’t treat them with care. Pages are torn out so other’s miss out on something they didn’t know.

Personal impact that the prize would have on this campus would be tremendous and everybody would be very thankful to have an opportunity at getting new and improved text books. With book covers to take care of the precious books. Recent text books we have seen were thrashed and were not updated what so ever. If us students get new text books we would be more thrilled to learn. The whole campus would be extremely thankful.



These books will help kids here at our school figure out the meaning of things and will make more sense then any other text book you will need. A other way it can help the students out that once they read the book and go over it they can exchange there knowledge to other students. It will not just keep flowing around my school but other school’s around the world. The text books are the key, learning is success. Also there is and extremely helpful online textbook.

We need to assure ourselves by not slacking on what us students already know. When students are getting ready to go to college they have to be prepared. Text books can be a better way to improve are learning skills, refreshing our minds, and most importantly learning more. Its a guarantee that once students are done with the text books they can tell others about the world. But after were all done,we will also learn more with the new textbooks that you guys have provided for us. I won’t just know more about the universe but everyone will to!  I wrote this essay with Brian Hernandez, we wrote it for the KNSD Homeroom Reform Esssay Contest.