One time for a halloween night Michael went to a place called knots scary farm. It was an experience that will never be left in my memory. The chills ran up Michael's body right as he pulled up into the driveway. He was frightened by the looks of everybody's faces. Right before the first ride there was someone dressed up as Jason x. The man skid across the floor with his knee pads and made me jump. I felt like a rocket launching off to space, it was the night Michael was scared out of his mind! The rest of the night he stood by his parents side begging to be held tight. He then looked past the night waiting to go home to stay underneath his sheets so something can hold him tight at night.
Michael, did you read the directions? You were supposed to write a memory in third-person limited narration. This contains firs-person narration. :(
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