Monday, January 10, 2011

"The Grandfather" Important Person Paragraph

The person that means a great deal to me is my dad, he is caring and is outgoing. He always wanted to take me and my brother Marcus some where instead of doing the same things ever single day. We usally tried to go to baseball games as much as possible or instead we would just go on a joy ride. My dad is important to me because he is the one I rely on to have a good time and do something all the time. Most of the time he is the only one that shows that he cares about me. My current relationship is not strong but since I don't see him a lot I have to communicate more so are relationship wont fall apart.

8 comments:

  1. Wow that is a lot of words but I think its good you try to stay in touch with you father that is the best reationship anybody could have.

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  2. Wow. How sweet! I like this post! keep up the good work!

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  3. Aw Michael how cute!You did a good job, Kepp up the good work.

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  4. I agree Mickey, you did really good on this post. Keep it up.

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  5. thats good that you have a relationship with your dad

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  6. I really like your post that's good that you had a good realationsjip with your dad.

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  7. That is a good explanation but you really should let dad know that so he feels u feel that way.

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  8. A dude good job man keep up the good work.

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