Wednesday, February 9, 2011

"Fog, Fire and Ice" Paragraph

  The animal in the poem "fog" is a cat, the animal is slowly soothing its way over the very tall buildings. I think the author chose this animal because it relates to the way the fog is moving in a way a cat does. I would of chosen a different animal because I think there is other animals that can have similar things that relate to how the fog was moving. For instance I would choose a lion because they prance, creep through thin brushes, and sneak around objects. It is kind of like a cat but just way bigger.

   I believe the world is going to end when a whole bunch of scientist get together and there sure something bad like 2012 would really happen. The world is going to end either on judgment day when god decides its time or some type of disaster like 2012 that is supposedly suppose to happen. What I think is going to happen is god will decide for himself when its time for all the good to go to heaven with him. I am not exactly sure when it is going to happen but I know it's not anytime soon. I think I will be driving on the freeway when I will be lifted out of my lamborghini into the gates of heaven!

3 comments:

  1. Eh! Nice one.If we do go to heaven where would that be?

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  2. That was long, good job dude keep it up

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  3. WOW thats a long paragraph keep it short next time.

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