Monday, February 13, 2012

Imagery in Poetry Blog Post Paragraph

I was in Carlsbad, California where me and my teamates had a football championship game. I seen a large crowd near are sidelines and less on the home side. I heard cheering from the crowd along with the cheerleaders. I felt a tingle in my body knowing we were getting closer to victory. I knelt down and put my right hand on the ground, rushed the quarter back and got a sack. The crowd was very loud. Then sure enough the buzzer went off and we were champions. I felt a sensation for this victory, happy that I could say me and my teamates won something that we earned for the first time as a family!

4 comments:

  1. thats preety cool that you play in the championship

    ReplyDelete
  2. I like how you able to experience the amazing feeling of winning something not by yourself but with you're family!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Thats really cool, good job. I think that would be an aweswome feeling for anyone.

    ReplyDelete