I just wanted to write you this letter to check up on you and see if your still hanging in there. When I tried to snatch that pocket book of yours I did feel sad at that point of time. I am now twenty years old, I also have changed a lot since back in the day. We can now look past that and tell eachother whats going on in both of our lives. Now I have two jobs, my first one is a garbage man the next one is that I have my own buisness which is a barber shop. How have you been doing Mrs. Jones? I want to hear back from you so you can tell me what you been doing after all these years.
Sincerely,
"Dear Mrs. Luella Bates Jones," (There is no comma after 'Dear,' nor is there a period at the end of the person addressed.
ReplyDeletePlease have someone proofread our work. There are a few errors that could have been avoided.