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I did well on expressing my feelings, I never did anything like this before and it was a great experience for me. A other thing I had done well on was my conclusion the great usage of words I used were great. My essay was not the best but it was pretty good. One thing I needed to change was the run on sentences I had, if I changed that it would of been above grade level. There wasnt much to correct there were just some grammar mistakes that I made. I can become a better writer by writing more words and using better proofreading skills. I used five paragraphs but I want to challenge myself to write more on my next coming essay's.
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