Sunday, September 12, 2010

9/11 Paragraph

I really did not experience this, I could not remember this at all. I seen the crash on the internet about the terroist, how they took over. That was very fatal to me when I had seen it, then again I have learned a lot about it since I've past through elementary school and middle school. I had wen't to New York this past spring break. I then had seen where the plane crashed into the twin towers also where all those people had lost there lives. They then were trying to target the pentagon and white house and our nations capital. That day changed a lot of things that we have to go by today. You have to ask yourself if that day affected the United States. I think it did but then again others have there own opinion on that situation.

1 comment:

  1. Michael, remember to proofread and edit your work!
    "I saw the crash," not "I seen the crash."
    "I went to NY," not "I had wen't.." ("Went" doesn't have an apostrophe!) Capitalize proper nouns (Twin Towers, Pentagon, White House, etc.)

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