Thursday, September 9, 2010

Being Thankful Short Story

People in America are not greatful, we don't look around at what we have,then what it could of been like back in the days. Natural dissatures happen and things had to be contructed  and like the hurricane in New Orleans for example. That was a very bad time for the men and women, also young girls and young boys. We need to examine the world, and make changes. Us Americans are now analyzing of what mistakes we done in the past and changing things so we can make ourselves better. Not just for you and me but for our communitys. Now in the twenty-first century we need to have consistinsy. Like Mr. Obama said he was going to make a change and he needs to stick with that and we can identify what those words really mean and be the best country we can possibly be.

1 comment:

  1. Michael, you need to proofread and edit your work before posting it. You can also have an adult or peers help you make corrections. This is causing you to lose points. :(

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